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Progress but slow progress
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Here's a quick sketch so far. Will post more progress throughout the night and day. So far, I am really digging this idea. Trying to go for a sci-fi 1950's deal with this concept art.
Thanks Max, looking forward to talking through this with you tomorrow. At first glance, I would suggest a bit more area of brightness, possibly contrast, to help create a stronger sense of emphasis within the composition. It's a bit hard to make out the forms, and more separation would help to situate them within a gradated and detailed field. Another formal choice that would help is to establish a clearer role for foreground, mid, and background, perhaps playing around a bit more with scale. Unless I'm interpreting the image incorrectly, it appears that you have some real estate at the upper-left of the composition that might be useful in creating a sense of regression into distant perspectival space. Such would help to anchor your visual activity within a clear scale and context within the world that you're creating. Also, while greyscale might be a strong stylistic choice, minimal yet decisive moments of color might go a long way to help carve out your details. Thank you for sharing it, looking forward to discussing tomorrow!
Thanks Max, looking forward to talking through this with you tomorrow. At first glance, I would suggest a bit more area of brightness, possibly contrast, to help create a stronger sense of emphasis within the composition. It's a bit hard to make out the forms, and more separation would help to situate them within a gradated and detailed field. Another formal choice that would help is to establish a clearer role for foreground, mid, and background, perhaps playing around a bit more with scale. Unless I'm interpreting the image incorrectly, it appears that you have some real estate at the upper-left of the composition that might be useful in creating a sense of regression into distant perspectival space. Such would help to anchor your visual activity within a clear scale and context within the world that you're creating. Also, while greyscale might be a strong stylistic choice, minimal yet decisive moments of color might go a long way to help carve out your details. Thank you for sharing it, looking forward to discussing tomorrow!
ReplyDeleteSounds good, Thank you!
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